A number of witnesses have contacted police who retraced last journey of a Businessman wanted in connection with the murders of a family of four .
Police have since named Anxiang Du , 52 years old suspect in their death's.
Dectectivs said a number of potential witnesses have reported sightinings of Mr Du last friday the day he disappeared .
CCTV camera on the bus showed had leftMR Du arriving from Birmingham in the same day .
Mr Du had shared his business with Ding family . Du who disapeared on the day of murder had left NOTE "saying goodby" at the shop where he worked .
Chineese born Mr Du is discribed as being of slim build and routinely wears a basball cap .
copy from BBC news 8/may/2011
Police have since named Anxiang Du , 52 years old suspect in their death's.
Dectectivs said a number of potential witnesses have reported sightinings of Mr Du last friday the day he disappeared .
CCTV camera on the bus showed had leftMR Du arriving from Birmingham in the same day .
Mr Du had shared his business with Ding family . Du who disapeared on the day of murder had left NOTE "saying goodby" at the shop where he worked .
Chineese born Mr Du is discribed as being of slim build and routinely wears a basball cap .
copy from BBC news 8/may/2011
Hi Ahmad. This is quite a grim story. When you write "copy from BBC news" is this something that you have read or listened to?
ReplyDeleteIn order to write a good summary, you should make it clear to your reader where your information comes from. You should also try to use your own words where possible. I suspect that "wanted in connection with the murders of a family of four", for example, is exactly the same as the original story.
For your next blog post, find something to read, summarise its main point in one or two sentences, and then write about your reactions to it. What is interesting, surprising, or worrying about what you read? If you take this approach to writing, you can be sure that you are using your own ideas and your own words.